#5DaysToVals Contest Entry Submitted by Adeyinka Joseph Alonge
In the wake of my brokenness!The words of heavy breathSmoothen smile turns tutChasing a colored filled hopeSongs to my ear, caught a brakeMy breath took a haltSo much love not reciprocatedA build up pressure in a lonesome aboundA heart whose love is shatteredOn the chariot of painI tread the path of graveBehold my world in pale of heavinessI beget the words of condolence to my failing heartThe genuity of my love up it disappears into vainWhat a world of normalcy displacedI lost my flair for loveAwesome as it isMiserable it can becomeI placed my cards close to my chestThis is a game of two mindsI give myself never to foolery againTruth be toldThis game I’ve lost interest*Sights*When I least expectedI was caught with a feast in famineAs another day cameI reminisced on how I met her and fell for her.As I entered the lab I bumped herWhile in my deepest thought,When I look into her eyes I was shocked and short of wordsStunned to a stillAll I could do is smileAs I stood gazing at herHer hello opened the floodgatesThose beautiful eyes, that even eclipse the Sun,That hair, as if a fountain of black magic whose onslaught can drown any heart into the main of loveI asked myself if I was day dreaming, then I realized its reality.Her voice tickles my soulHer cheerful dispensationHer genuine smile they melt my heartShe asked me what I was doing; I said “my project”Within a short time I knew everything about her and she about meSuch a wonderful connectionSometimes I wonder why I haven’t met her long agoBut she told me, that the best comes into our lives when we least expectedI embrace the wind of change that comes with a breeze of affectionI came to terms with her worldThere sprung the waters of expression and emotionsI found it where I least expectedDeep beneath the oceans of serendipityNew water poured into an old poundDeeply profound feelingsMore than a woman, oh! Heaven giveth meI glow with happinessDark ages goneA new moon rises along the ocean pathOh heavens alight by the joy of my risen loveI play my chords in ecstasyThis deep love is reflected in every actions and thoughtsCare and affection comes from her naturally with all the long rosy talksDelighted by the waves of our auraA match made in heavenJoy with the support and assuranceAffection without measuresThroughout my life I will remember the course I took to finding her,Measure of happiness un quantifiedFor her unconditional love provides everlasting fragrance to all the airs that graced my breath.My love again you awaken.This is an experience that will live in my heart forever; I love you more everyday.
106 comments
Lovely poem
Lovely
Wow, make sense
Moral of the lesson-Love will surely find u,and when it does it will be amazing. Nice piece Joseph, loved the way it ended in a climax. Thumbs up! It is a very nice piece.
Wao one of the best poem i’ve read
mmmmmm intresting keep it up
thumbs up
I just love the concept of the poem….. Very interesting tale. Nice one Alonge.
Absolutely captivating!!!
Wow!!! *speechless*
This is a beautiful piece
This is awesome
Joe beautiful one you really write well
Nice write up! Thumbs up
Really Nice!! Thumbs up
Well written. Good job bro.
Soaked in strong emotions. This is simply captivating
Sometimes you read some story and it dazzles you. 100%.
Nice one Alonge.you’re already a star!
This is a true wake up call to her love. U have already confessed and reaffirmed your love for this Queen. U done a good job my friend. Keep it up.
Good job my friend. Love really awaken for this valentine.
That was so cool
That was so cool
This is a very beautiful piece.
Simply spellbinding
Simply spellbinding
Good job
This lady is lucky to have you oh!see rhymes!lol! These words make love so beautiful and pure. Thumbs up Joe 🙂 ?
Awesome poem
The girl must be so special to attract this kind of lovely piece . Great poem.
Impressive i must say. Joe baba this is wonderful
Nice Lines. I like the art you put in the poem. Good one i must say.
Lolu- cool piece ,I wish I could write love poems. More power to your elbow
Wao this guy writes very well. Thumbs up.
Real love makes you forgot all heart breaks. Very crafty with words. that makes the poem super cool
Good poetic concept infused with story… Lovely
It soothes my soul
The best comes into our life when we least expected, not always but it a nice heart pouring poem.
Awww Joe write me a poem, eh will you
I’ve always liked all your works I’ve seen. Another beautiful one i must say
Nice one Joe. You got me concentrating
Epic!! Thumbs up Joseph.
Epic! Thumbs up Jo.
Its cool…
Hmmm… lovely lines
Excellent one Joe
Hmmmmmm… Nice lines… Weldone!
A job weldone… Astonishing
Wow!
It’s truly an awaken love. Nicely put together.
Creative! (Amy from Simcat)
wow, so romantic.
Joe, your flow and connection is something else. All accolades to you…
This is great, neatly composed. Accurately delivered
Alonge wonderful writeup…… It’s really refreshing
Applaudise…. This so captivating, keep it up Ade
Cool
Its really beautiful and fulfilling to truly find love.
Brilliant poem….100%…brought back memories. Keep it up.
wow…..bro your the best….100 to you bro
that hair as if a fountain of black magic that drown into the main of love. my favorite line . epic poem
wow…… 100 is ur mark. great job
Nice piece
wow your the best bro…….nice
Really nice, Joe
Splendid. Pure and untainted.
Nigerians r so intelligent. Nice poem
Awesome poem, what an electrifying poem thumb up man!
Absolute beauty….. Joe i’m really impressed.
Another masterpiece from my guy….. You never disappoint
Ade nice job…… Just keep the passion burning. I trust your skill . Anyway i will be looking forward to another great poem. And i trust you will deliver. Be good.
Wow, make sense
Touching lines
Great write up. Keep it up
Joe my man. I like this one oo… True genius
I so love dis… Thumbs up!
Nice and captivating. Great lines!
One of those poems you read and you get all emotional. I love it
Nice one joe.
This poem is makin me to miss someone .nice one Joe
This poem is makin me to miss someone. Nice one Joe
Sometimes when i read nice poems i wish i can write but God bless us all with different talents….. God will continually improve you. Thumbs up
Lovely
Good job Adeyinka.
This is one of those poems you read that makes you believe yet again in love. Great poem
Beautifully composed. Nice one
Nice poem. Pure talent
Cool and lovely rhymes. Hope to see something other than love poem soon. Keep it up.
Adeyinka this is really good…. I love the organisation brief and very explanatory nice story
Hmmmm this is sweet oooo and really dope
The poem smothens my soul when i read it. Get me thinking of bae . Thumbs up
Lovely piece, thumbs up
What a captivating piece…. Lovely
I must say I’m really impressed
Wow! This is amazing, the carefully scripted words mimics the sculpture of a seasoned craftsman with a great attention to details
sounds alluring
Nice one. Joe
nice one bro keep it up
Beautifully scripted!
Breathtaking lines. It’s really a good one
Wao I’m really impressed nice composition and wonderful use of words. Brillant
What a beautiful composition.
Nice piece………well composed and brilliantly delivered
Its just awesome. Nice
Nice one
This is astonishingly Romantic. A great piece cuddled with words of ecstasy. I really must commend your great article. It’s soothing, easily comprehensive and superb. Thumb’s up for ya bro. Mucha Luva